cohacq
05-15-2006, 01:03 PM
I've been writing on some songs for about a year and a half, and I fought I'd post them here, most of them are barely half-done, so i hope you people here got some advice :)
Posting them in the order i wrote them
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Looking out the window
I am looking out the window
I see a couple people there
they seem to be in love
That guy is such a loser
what the **** is with that hair
I wish that girl could see me
But she doesnt
*chorus*
Why is it love that will never find me?
I hate this hell i'm livin' in
If you did see Me
we could walk down the stairway of love
We should have such a great time
That your time with Him
Should seem like a Waste
Why is it love that will never find me?
I hate this hell i'm livin' in
But, It seems like you never are gonna see me
so ill guess my life just aint worth it........
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The Gunman
You came into a house
From a sudden storm
But suddenly
You feel that someone else
Is in the room
and he says: Dont worry, im gonna end you quick
*chorus*
The Gunman takes up his Gun
The Gunman loads it and aims it at You
The fear comes upon you
You scream in fear but nobody hears you
He talks again, and says: i Like to shoot close
You stand there trying to move
But you are frozen to Stone
The Gunman takes up his Gun
The Gunman loads it and aims it at You
With a loud bang you see your life pass
In front of your eyes
Then you see a white light
And you suddenly feel comfort
But you know youre dead
No matter how hard you try
You cant get back
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Fuel and Fire
She stood upon a Hill
watching the city that was ablaze
it was she, who laid out the fuel
and then igniting the Fire
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
When i came behing her
She turned around
And laughed at me
I could see Insanity in her eyes
I knew i had to
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
When i raised my gun at her
She doesnt move
She stand still when i push the trigger
She gets hit in the heart
But doesnt fall
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
Instead, she contiues to laugh
Her laugh is driving me Mad
A voice speaks inside me: So, i have found my new Body here....
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
(repeat to finish)
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Just be yourself
I've seen people pretending
to be something
they aint
it just destroys them
from the inside
become unfriendly with others
dont got the courage
to be themselves
people call them wannabes
but i call them
unsure of their own minds
I admit
ive been one myself
but i managed to get away
and become myself
but i lost
my so-called friends
found new ones
and now have it alot better
(this one is barely a song, just wrote it after having Come as you Are on repeat for to long)
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The Price
Your Heart is
So full of Pain
and Misery
You feel like life passed you by
You Need some help
And that, I can provide
I can give you
Everything you need
But, for a Price
Yes, everything has a Price
I can give you everything you want, everything you need
I can give you everything you want, everything you need
For a Price
You want That, you want This (x2)
Yes, i can give you that
For a Price
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(Wont) cut myself
Going out for a day
wont cut myself today
but im bored
no alcohol
to drown my sorrow
and anger
no friends
no-one to trust
really dont like
these scars
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
miss my ex girlfriend
really lot
wish she could be here
But i guess its just
Teenage Angst
Anger growing
Inside me
Sorrow growing
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
Grew up
pretty munch
without
a father
But i followed
my brothers pattern
yes, i did follow
his pattern
of music
Just hope
i get better
with time
but i wont
cut myself
ever again...
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
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She
I saw her on the street
She didnt have the most amazing looks
but she still caught me
Yeah, I'm in love, I'm in love, in love
Now shes my girl, shes my girl
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Alright, I admit most of them are copies of Nirvana songs where i just juggled around the words, exept "Fuel and Fire" and "She", which are Deep Purple and Ramones copies, respectively.
Regards
Coh'
Posting them in the order i wrote them
---------------------
Looking out the window
I am looking out the window
I see a couple people there
they seem to be in love
That guy is such a loser
what the **** is with that hair
I wish that girl could see me
But she doesnt
*chorus*
Why is it love that will never find me?
I hate this hell i'm livin' in
If you did see Me
we could walk down the stairway of love
We should have such a great time
That your time with Him
Should seem like a Waste
Why is it love that will never find me?
I hate this hell i'm livin' in
But, It seems like you never are gonna see me
so ill guess my life just aint worth it........
---------------------
The Gunman
You came into a house
From a sudden storm
But suddenly
You feel that someone else
Is in the room
and he says: Dont worry, im gonna end you quick
*chorus*
The Gunman takes up his Gun
The Gunman loads it and aims it at You
The fear comes upon you
You scream in fear but nobody hears you
He talks again, and says: i Like to shoot close
You stand there trying to move
But you are frozen to Stone
The Gunman takes up his Gun
The Gunman loads it and aims it at You
With a loud bang you see your life pass
In front of your eyes
Then you see a white light
And you suddenly feel comfort
But you know youre dead
No matter how hard you try
You cant get back
-------------
Fuel and Fire
She stood upon a Hill
watching the city that was ablaze
it was she, who laid out the fuel
and then igniting the Fire
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
When i came behing her
She turned around
And laughed at me
I could see Insanity in her eyes
I knew i had to
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
When i raised my gun at her
She doesnt move
She stand still when i push the trigger
She gets hit in the heart
But doesnt fall
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
Instead, she contiues to laugh
Her laugh is driving me Mad
A voice speaks inside me: So, i have found my new Body here....
Fuel and Fire, a deadly combination
Fuel and Fire, so munch horror they can bring
Fuel and Fire, oh so munch destuction
(repeat to finish)
--------------
Just be yourself
I've seen people pretending
to be something
they aint
it just destroys them
from the inside
become unfriendly with others
dont got the courage
to be themselves
people call them wannabes
but i call them
unsure of their own minds
I admit
ive been one myself
but i managed to get away
and become myself
but i lost
my so-called friends
found new ones
and now have it alot better
(this one is barely a song, just wrote it after having Come as you Are on repeat for to long)
----------------------------
The Price
Your Heart is
So full of Pain
and Misery
You feel like life passed you by
You Need some help
And that, I can provide
I can give you
Everything you need
But, for a Price
Yes, everything has a Price
I can give you everything you want, everything you need
I can give you everything you want, everything you need
For a Price
You want That, you want This (x2)
Yes, i can give you that
For a Price
-----------
(Wont) cut myself
Going out for a day
wont cut myself today
but im bored
no alcohol
to drown my sorrow
and anger
no friends
no-one to trust
really dont like
these scars
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
miss my ex girlfriend
really lot
wish she could be here
But i guess its just
Teenage Angst
Anger growing
Inside me
Sorrow growing
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
Grew up
pretty munch
without
a father
But i followed
my brothers pattern
yes, i did follow
his pattern
of music
Just hope
i get better
with time
but i wont
cut myself
ever again...
No, i wont cut myself today (repeat x2)
No, i wont drink to
drown my feelings
--------------------
She
I saw her on the street
She didnt have the most amazing looks
but she still caught me
Yeah, I'm in love, I'm in love, in love
Now shes my girl, shes my girl
-------------
Alright, I admit most of them are copies of Nirvana songs where i just juggled around the words, exept "Fuel and Fire" and "She", which are Deep Purple and Ramones copies, respectively.
Regards
Coh'