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MCW
12-04-2003, 04:06 PM
Dismar responded, “ It has been many, many years Kathrin. It warms my heart to see your face, although I wish these were better circumstances.”
“I wish these were better circumstances too, but I fear my time in this world may soon be running out. I can already sense dark evil consuming us all, invisible and we are unable to fight back.”
With those words, Alexei burst from Dismar’s grasp, stole Dismar’s sword and charged at Kathrin. The Black Warrior having unknown connections with Kathrin ran with great speed and was able to come between Alexei and Kathrin. Although all his efforts he had knocked Kathrin into one of the side windows while he was pierced in the chest with the sword. Snapping out of his violent trance, Alexei quickly attended the injured Black Warrior. With his last breath, the Black Warrior murmured his final words.
“Why, father, why?”

Serresrelic
12-04-2003, 06:31 PM
... ok

Kaylen
12-04-2003, 06:36 PM
... ok

My thoughts exactly.

Ciarin
12-04-2003, 06:48 PM
me too

Trastero
12-04-2003, 07:13 PM
How many threads have you started in the last 48 hours, MCW?

offensivename
12-04-2003, 09:52 PM
hmm, what happened to 1-10?

MCW
12-04-2003, 10:07 PM
just posting somthing on the "special forum" to me these topics move slower than I'm used to, politics, religion and philisopies have more discussion to them... I used the special forum for what it was meant for, fluff, meaningless stuff, maybe someone will enjoy it, some wont.

I stood within the forum rules, I did not post anything "racist, religious, political, derrogatory, disrspectful or promotional. I posted this message for anyone who might enjoy reading it. I do a lot of reading, and I thought it would of been nice to post somthing. Take in mind that I did not clutter the other forum.

Ciarin
12-04-2003, 10:08 PM
ok

offensivename
12-04-2003, 10:15 PM
ussually the insanity is more vivid and better explained I mean I could start posting random parts from CC and Washington Times articles here, but thats not really "wacky" just kind of eh

Wooleen Shadowraith
12-04-2003, 10:18 PM
..who did what now?

Ciarin
12-04-2003, 10:19 PM
So did you want to discuss this passage or something?

what book is it from?

offensivename
12-04-2003, 10:26 PM
Also, what happened to the first world? and why is there a need for a second? And where do babies come from?

MCW
12-04-2003, 10:29 PM
heh, thats a good question, I could post the answers, but I have a feeling id have like 20 people flaming the post if Idid.

Ciarin
12-04-2003, 10:31 PM
babies come from storks.


see a mommy stork and a daddy stork, when they really love each other, do a magical dance in the woods, and then they fly the baby to you in a handkerchief, and drop it in a cabbage patch.

or 2 people have sex....


and MCW, no one flames anyone here. It's part of the rules.

MCW
12-04-2003, 10:51 PM
lets see if I can condense the 200 pages of the "First World" into a paragraph.

It starts out in about this time frame, a young man had just gotton married and had begun to settle down. Shortly after his wife is killed during a terrorist attack. Devistated by the loss of his only love, he became consumed with angry and hatred. With nothing to love all you have left is hatred "Stalin's a good example of this, im sured he'd be peaceful farmer if he hadnt lost his first wife back in the early 1920's"

Not quite sure how to deal with his anger this young man seaks help and runs into a retired Viet Nam veteran, who himself has suffered tramatic losses in the past. Eventually the young man becomes greatly involved with the world politics and starts the re-united the former Soviet Union. While his new friend the viet nam vet, has decided he had given enough for his country and began to tour the U.S. and eventually start a civil war, causing mass riots and soon he and his loyal followers of his side of the civil war sieze power from the government.

Having the U.S. in a crumbled war torn state, most of asia being reunited by the young man. The world has pretty much been taken over by 2 men. While these 2 men cordinate their efforts to help each other out, they began to try and improve society, and the young man spends much time and money trying to invent a time machine to save his lost one from her fate.

they never invent such a device, but they figure out the secret of longevity and invunerablity to the phisical world, which doesnt do much despite the emotionlly scarred past of these men. Secretly the Eurpeon countries believe this dictatorship is not right and invades one day, destroying the capital city of the young man's new empire, have lost his home, he had decided "that if he wasnt meant for this world, he would take all with him."

And with those words, he had detonated the old rusting nukes of the former russia.

thus the world shatters apart, but someone it had been reborn and only the men saved by their invunerablity devices survive to make it into the 2nd world.